Whizzing along

Ragtag Daily Prompt Friday: Limit

We boarded the train
and headed off
what to discover
the countryside
blurring
more
at every second

Comfortable seats
room to spare
further along
clink
clank
rattle
rustle
the food trolley
almost here

But look
I say
the limit
achieved
Whizzing along

Later on……

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16 thoughts on “Whizzing along

  1. A great verse: though I thought the onomatopoeic words applied even better to the more elderly trains in your collection. That Spanish high speed train is quite a thing though, isn’t it? We went from Barcelona and on to Paris last summer, on the top deck no less. Wonderful.

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        1. Yep. Having the barista making espressos on the Italian train, afternoon tea, coffee or beer on the Spanish train and having apΓ©ritif in the dining car on the French train with the woman behind the bar teetering about in high heels

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