Judy’s poem challenge to me
Photo from Judy’s post What is it? Last on the Card: January 2022 which inspired the poetry challenge
From Judy “What should be a poem? Hot wax on water? I’ll write one if you will.”
and then “I may change it to Hot wax on Cold Water. But is it a challenge?”
My reply”I find it hard to actually compose a poem. Most of mine are spur of the moment words that dribble out. I’ll give it a go but has to be Hot Wax on Water title 😃”
So here it is Judy
Bubbling pot
steam and brew
dish of water
just a spot.
Now look
swirls and stew
wax rising
being hot.
The shapes
colour and falter
it’s just
hot wax on water.
Over to you Judy, knowing your superior poetry skills will just crush mine
bushboys world 
wel I think you crushed it BB – and read it twice it had such non-wait flow – (ha)
best wishes to Judy with her take
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Lovely of you to say Yvette but Judy is a poem mistress with more of a deft touch than I 🙂
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🙂
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Can’t resist a challenge, Bushboy…so here is my answer to your poem. Thanks for the play date! https://judydykstrabrown.com/2022/02/02/hot-wax-cold-water/
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It was a bit of fun thanks Judy 🙂
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Good one Brian
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Thanks Sadie 🙂 🙂
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You’re welcome my friend
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https://judydykstrabrown.com/2022/02/02/hot-wax-cold-water/
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well I think you did pretty good!
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Thanks for your biased comment Becky 😂
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I am a renowned poetry reviewer, didn’t you know!
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I guess Mr B has many a poetry book 😂
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I think you did an excellent job, far better than I would!
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It’s OK I guess thanks 🙂
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Oh how fun. 😀 😀
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It was a bit of fun 🙂
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