Debbie’s One Word Sunday: Early
A song to listen while reading. It is the early song from my early life
Awaken
my love
the sun has
tried to
break through.
The distance
shrouded
trees appear
await
bird song.
I am
the mist
ready
to envelop
your senses.
Awaken
my love
love
has broken
through.
The mist
has risen
my body
awaits
gentle touch.
Awaken
my love
’tis early.
Ragtag Daily Prompt: Awaken
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I can never do that because I’m always singing to the music in my head, so I had to stop and read your lovely words separately, Brian 🙂 🙂
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Thanks Jo 🙂 yes I do find reading and listening a bit difficult. Funny as when I was working I always had music playing to drown out the chitter chatter of the other people in the office when I was moved to an open plan area.
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Lovely poem, Brian. As a child, Morning Has Broken was my favourite school assembly hymn, whenever I hear it now I’m eleven years old again. 🙂
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Thank you Sue 🙂 glad to evoke a treasured memory
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Oh Wow, I haven’t heard Cat Stevens since college…way before you were born 🙂 And your poem–very wonderful!!
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So happy to bring the past to the present for you. Glad you like the words that flowed after seeing my photo. College in the 40’s?
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College in early 70’s 🙂 Definitely loved your poem 🙂
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That’s good to hear from a wonderful poet 🙂
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Oh my, aren’t you sweet 🙂
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PS: And the misty photo–love it!
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Thanks 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Three elements and all excellent, Brian. I liked the way your tender words led us into that gorgeous misty image.
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Thank you ever so much Debbie 🙂 A OWS which had the inspiration juices flowing
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I remember that song. Your words and photo hit just the right note, too, so to speak. 🙂
janet
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Thanks ever so much janet 🙂 🙂
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Beautifully written words Brian. And the song took me back…. ❤
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Thanks Lisa 🙂 thought you would enjoy the song
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A most beautiful song I enjoy singing as a hymn Sunday’s at church!
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Thanks Robert 😀
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